I want the essay to be changed such that it best exemplify these attributes: 1- maturity, reliability, perseverance and responsibility (professional cluster); 2- communication, collaboration, time management, team-work and leadership (communicator/collaborator/manager cluster); 3- advocacy, community service and social responsibility (advocate cluster); and 4- achievements in academic standing, leadership, research and social responsibility as demonstrated by (but not limited to) awards, conference presentations, publications and scholarships (scholar cluster). : Essays