hey, you worked on my essay two days ago. My professor’s feedback is here:As I mentioned in the instructions for this assignment, the purpose of a persuasion piece is to get an audience to buy something a person, a thing, an idea or an action. To that end, youve done a nice job on this piece. Your introduction is compelling, the body of your argument builds on the introduction and supply the necessary facts and your conclusion is solid. The problem is that you were to make one argument for the honor code and one argument against it If you would like to submit another argument to me via email in the next 24 hours (it need only be three-quarters to one page in length), I will give you partial credit for it.

Can you fix that ? She only give me 50/100 pts.