Death of a Salesman 1 page needs to have a formal outline with 3 evidences per claim which I am providing and the next three pages needs to be an essay off the formal outline including. The three evidences must be quotes from the story. Thesis: Willy and Bens relationship were both and not so good in the story. Ben is represented in the story as a successful man and Bens success makes Willy feel like sort of a failure. Claim # 1 Willy didnt know his father and wants to be closer to his brother and sees his success and wants to show that he can be as good as him. Claim # 2 Willy saw that with Ben being an entrepreneur it made to prideful and turned down offers for help. Claim # 4 Willy saw Bens success through the trip to Africa and seven kids and that Bens kids were taken care of so Willy has been plotting to kill himself for the money for his family. The essay must include an introduction then my thesis statement the claims and evidences must put in essay form and then a conclusion statement. The story is the one source needed