Does the opening sentence accurately reflect the content of the paragraph?
Identify at least 4 different methods to reach an intended audience.
August 7, 2017Write a one-page essay explaining why some people think that anyone with a good sense of humor is healthier than those who do not have a good sense of humor. Describe why some people would think that that this is just a matter of opinion.
August 7, 2017- Module 3 Discussions – Peer Review to Improve Writing (PART 5)
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Peer review is one more tool for improving writing. Even the most veteran writers benefit from the constructive feedback of others; your peers can give you different perspectives because they do not have the same emotional attachment to your writing as you do. Peers can provide valuable comments and suggestions on your writing’s strengths and weaknesses that you can use to revise your work.
For this activity, complete the following steps:
1. Post the first draft of a Comparison/Contrast paragraph which you created for Activity 3.4 in this discussion.
2. Read at least three of your classmates’ Comparison/Contrast paragraphs and provide constructive feedback. The comments from the class need to be distributed so everyone receives reviews.
3. Review using the questions given as guidance:
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- Is there a clear opening topic sentence?
- Does the opening sentence accurately reflect the content of the paragraph?
- Is there specific support for the topic sentence?
- Is there adequate support for the topic sentence?
- Is there a clear method of organization, one side at a time or point-by-point?
- Did you use a consistent point of view in your paragraph?
- Are your sentences varied and balanced?
- Have you checked for mistakes in grammar, usage, punctuation, and spelling?
- Provide the following feedback: Explain the one thing you found most effective and why. Suggest one thing that you would change and why.
Module 3 – Compose a Final Draft of a Comparison/Contrast Paragraph (PART 6)
Now that you have provided your feedback, review the input you have received for your paragraph. Finish the revision and editing process and submit your final draft.
Your Comparison/Contrast paragraph should contain:
- Approximately 150-200 words
- A well-developed topic sentence
- Adequate and specific detail to support the topic sentence
- A clear method of organization
- A consistent point of view
- Varied and balanced sentences
Note: Use the “Checklist for Comparison or Contrast,” page 244, when revising and editing your paragraph. Complete the assignment in a document. Make sure your name is on your document and the file.
