The Chapter Eldorado felt very calm and generous feeling. The people were very innocent. Even the king of Eldorado was very honest man compare to other kings from europe. Eldorado people treat them with out any calculations of benefits.
This national character coming from lack of religious fight. People in this country are worship one GOD. The King worship same God as the citizen. The great advantage of religion to believe that one kind is hydroponic. With one mind they can united in to one. People are not aggressive because there aren’t any armed aggression from other country because of their good geographical sources. Once There was a failure invasion by Sir Walter Raleigh. It’s hard to approach, Eldorado is surrounded by rugged mountains and cliffs. There for citizens are lack of hatred. There are less political conflict because there aren’t any invasion. It all leads to none political conflicts. The leaders of Eldorado debate or give attention about invention, develop arts and science.
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my english is second language. the writer dont hav to be fancy writing. it can be level of junior high, i need a draft, and revised version

1.write organized reponse and present your argument clearly and logically.
2.include an introduction with thesis statemrnt, three body paragraphs and conclusion.