Hi Dr. I would like you to review the paper on the basis provided below. I will attach a copy of the paper along with another scanned copy with my hand written comments. Here are the other comments: – Language is poor, a lot of repetition, use of odd words and expressions; – Paper not well structured: – No numbering, no table of contents and no index; – NO list of abbreviations, – No Abstract and the reference list in not categorized (Books, JOunals and Websites or Primary and secondary sources); The paper refers to UAE and Qatar without providing reference materials or examples for the same. Please review the paper and let me know how best to improve it. Thanks,