Is there safety in numbers

Chapter 1 second paragraph is copied from Internet cite – delete and paraphrase. Refer to APA to properly format headings (p. 62) (both chapters). Write out numbers

less than 10 in word format (both chapters). Avoid “it” “my” “we” “I” for more scholarly writing. Write in past tense (both chapters). In Chapter 1, under the

Organizational Content section should include a brief paragraph of what will be included in the following paragraphs. Cite where you found the 80/20 Rule. In the Scope

of the Problem section, the idiom is “there is safety in numbers” not “is there safety…” Chapter 1 missing Definition of Terms section. Refer to APA to properly

format reference page. Indent second paragraph in the Significance of the Project section.

Under the title for Chapter 2 delete heading (first paragraph is the introductory paragraph – do not include a heading). Use headings for Chapter 2 as outline in the

instructions (can add headings but need to include required headings). Three quotes are included in Chapter 2 however only one short quote is allowed (need to

paraphrase other quoted material). Chapter 2 section: Importance of numbers in social life, last paragraph is copied from Internet – delete and paraphrase. Weak

summary.

Check your references. Should use EBSCOhost. If from miscellaneous Internet sites – you need to check credibility of that site.

Make all changes as suggested above before submitting your final draft.